A Pair of New Clams
Kamakura— a toddler attracted to a gap in the wall |
eiko |
two kisses and sixpence from the tooth fairy |
paul |
hop, step, and jump through the mottled dirt road a summer hat |
eiko |
cooled in the cathedral she resumes shopping |
paul |
eyebrow moon hangs on the indigo shadow of a skyscraper |
eiko |
another busy day at the waxing salon |
paul |
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power cuts bring a week of candlelight and many a story |
paul |
‘no net ensnares me’, was that cry a confession? |
eiko |
out on the moor we dig a snow hole and try to get some sleep |
paul |
a suave band dances aurora borealis |
eiko |
flexing joints the old man off in search of a heart |
paul |
today Nature retracted the stap cell paper |
eiko |
we pass quickly through the hall of mirrors into the freak show |
paul |
leaving his palace young Buddha to be |
eiko |
someone plays the lute and softly sings Moon of Alabama |
paul |
can’t shed dewdrops a weary butterfly |
eiko |
sit down! sit down! it’s only a harvest mouse in with the grain |
paul |
awaken to the clog-steps of blossom viewers |
eiko |
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long day a registered mail came back as unclaimed |
eiko |
plates of mud pies in the play house |
paul |
a fragrance of dusk wraps walkers from waterloo station |
eiko |
the wild grass dreams of Mont Saint Jean |
paul |
from the frayed side of an iron helmet a beautiful beetle |
eiko |
searching grandma’s box for the right shirt button |
paul |
lest you should have a crush on him, remember a pocketful of rye |
eiko |
after thirty good years a return to Gretna Green |
paul |
waves keep on rushing into the cave bringing subtle voices |
eiko |
her second scan shows she’s in remission |
paul |
for their feast quail eggs boiled, each becomes the body of a crane |
eiko |
semaphore signals ‘not waving but drowning’ |
paul |
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the professor points out the Sea of tranquility over Fukushima |
paul |
the fresh brisk winds drying a tsunami bible |
eiko |
the eldest ewe nuzzles in a lost lamb from the autumn field |
paul |
Little Boy Blue Come blow your horn |
eiko |
she slowly raises her cherry blossom tattoo for comparison |
paul |
a pair of new clams in Neptune’s Garden |
shuhitsu |
Paul Conneally, Loughborough, England
Eiko Yachimoto, Yokosuka, Japan
The on-line composition of the Kasen-style renku started on 29 June, 2014 and completed on 19 July, 2014.
It has been nearly ten years since I wrote a renku in a session led by Paul. I used to translate all my renku into Japanese, during the process of which I had fun creating Japanese equivalent for Paul’s charming links. Some of them have taken root in me, thus a boy reading Basho in the first train has been with me as I lost my sister, both of my parents, Hortensia Anderson and John Carley, my long time renku friends.
A Pair of New Clams literally happened on facebook this summer like a pleasant conversation between two old friends. Unlike me I did not pay much attention to the rules of kasen. Let it be was my attitude.
I am always a language lover, but this renku not only revealed forgotten chords and nooks in me but also proved one article I clipped today: “our language, the solid mother earth, becomes richer as we plow her with our fresh words!” Inter-cultural renku, where poets have more chances to cut open an untrodden terrain, seems to have an advantage: Being different from each other gives birth to a new soil, a new life.
For those who are in trouble, depression, doubt or sorrow, renku has got an enormous power. It gives them flourishing perspectives towards life. Rereading, I am finding myself gently consoled.
I cannot thank Paul enough.
Eiko Yachimoto
27 September, 2014
And I in turn thank Eiko. Always an inspiration.
Paul Conneally
2 December, 2015
‘A Pair of New Clams’ was first published in A Hundred Gourds 4:1 December 2014
Gathering Clams, Children’s Play – Miyagawa Shuntei 1896
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I read this a few years ago, but this is like reading it for the first time. I am blown away by the elegance and beauty on display here, and the space created and filled when renju are at total ease with each other.
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Enjoy this renku.