Cheers!a pint of stoutto keep out the cold -half-way home.
thanks Gabi – I also thought of moving to 4 lines or 1half-way homea pint of stoutto keep outthe coldthe internal rhyme will infuriate some in the west who believe that their should never be any ‘poetics’ especially rhyme…half-way homea pint of stout to keep outthe cold- for me half-way home comes first because thats how it feels … oh nearly half-way home – and heres the pub … i’ll just pop in 🙂
Burn The Water 
Cheers!a pint of stoutto keep out the cold -half-way home.
thanks Gabi – I also thought of moving to 4 lines or 1half-way homea pint of stoutto keep outthe coldthe internal rhyme will infuriate some in the west who believe that their should never be any ‘poetics’ especially rhyme…half-way homea pint of stout to keep outthe cold- for me half-way home comes first because thats how it feels … oh nearly half-way home – and heres the pub … i’ll just pop in 🙂