the winter sun – a teikei renku – nijuin

John Carley,??Paul Conneally and Sheila Windsor
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a teikei renku ??????????nijuin ??????????the winter sun

???? I charge my brush?????????? with water
and splash the page???????????? the winter sun????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

?? jec
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discovering??????????????a wren???? ?? in the back border????????????????????????????????????????????????

?? pc
??

his train pulls in?????????????????? to the strangeness
???????????????? ??of a once?????????????????? familiar place??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

?? sw
??

fresh baked bread??????????????????on a table?????????? set with silver??????????????????

?? sw
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moonlight floods?????????? ??a bed of leaves
???????? as drunkards?????????? ??hunt the hedgehog

?? jec
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granddad???????? takes the children out???????? trick-or-treating

?? pc
??

over and over???????????? ??thru fireglow
?? to the wind???s??????????????whistling moan

?? sw
??

within the mountain?????????????? ??men burn out?????????????? like candles

?? jec
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???????????????????????? a dog???????? ?? chasing the priest???s cat
down the aisle?????????????? and out the back door

?? pc
??

along this narrow pathway?????????????? prayer flags???????????? meet sky

?? sw
??

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butterflies???????????? by their hundreds
thousands?????????? deck the summer pasture

?? jec
??

lavender perfume???????????? rising???????? with the full moon

?? pc
??

?? a perfect circle?????????????? on the ceiling
from last night???s??????????????????champagne cork

?? sw
??

drawing back the blinds????????????????she sings?????????? just like a girl

?? jec
??

????????????????the head teacher?????????????? averts his eyes
from two sixth-formers?????????????? ??kissing

?? pc
??

the clairvoyant?????????? describes???????????? my scarlet aura

?? sw
??

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after a few drinks???????????? under the mirrorball
??????????????????????????????????things???????????? seem better

?? pc
??

come the dawn?????????? ??the snow?????????? rolls back up into cloud

?? jec
??

??????????????draw him home?????????????? lilac blossom
while your fragrance???????????? fills my garden

?? sw
??

three fledglings???????? strut around??????????????in the late spring warmth

?? pc


authors: John Carley (jec), Paul Conneally (pc), Sheila Windsor (sw)

verses selected principally by turn (hizaokori)
written to the form proposed by the master Meiga Higashi
thanks to: Kirsty Karkow

Published ORBIS Edition 121 Spring 2002

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